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That was such a wonderfully done emotional moment. Hopefully I'll continue to like Finn and he doesn't betray Kurt and Blaine.

Thank you! I'm glad. Yes, hopefully... *is cryptic* :)

glued to the computer, hodamn. this is fantastic, and I can't wait to get to read more. <3 I love how deeply you go into all of the feelings which would arise from a situation like this, both the doubt and misery, and the hope and love. SDFKJNFDGJKBHDF SORRY I CAN'T BE MORE COHERENT THAN THAT. sdfjkhfd >.>

No worries, that was plenty coherent. :) And yay, keysmash! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I really love the way you express their feelings. And the way Kurt comforted Blaine was amazing.

Again your words are just beautiful - I've read all the parts of chapter 4 a few times just to fully appreciate the whole thing. Totally gorgeous and real and enthralling. Sorry for any odd formatting I'm posting from phone but I just wanted to tell you how much I love this :)

Wonderful comment, and don't worry, the formatting looks fine. :) You've no idea how happy it makes me that you think that my writing warrants re-reading. Hopefully future chapters will keep you interested. :)

that was really amazing and emotional and gorgeous and it was really neat to have it through Finn's POV.

Thank you! :) I thought it'd be interesting to get an outsiders POV, so I'm glad you liked it. And Finn is kinda fun to write. :)

So glad to see the update! And so worried now about the word getting out in a way Blaine can't control. But that's what happens sometimes . . .

Indeed it does. Not saying it will here though. Not saying it won't. :)

oh wow, I was sorta afraid that the dramatic tension would fade now that Kurt knows about Blaine and is proving that he loves him, etc... but this chapter piece *really* upped the ante. I can't wait to find out what happens next...

Finn is so frustrating on the show, but I love when fanfic authors write him in a way that I still like him and am convinced that he has a genuinely good heart, despite his shortcomings. I liked how you used his POV in this scene, excellent.

Thank you for that comment! One of the points I really wanted to make with this chapter was that while Kurt has turned out to be supportive and doesn't have one foot out the door, it doesn't mean that it will be an easy road, or that there will never be issues, so I'm glad that was something you noticed.

I hear ya about Finn being frustrating on the show, but I do think that, however misguided he can be, that he does have a good heart, so that's how I like to write him. :)

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